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Rock and skin me (Free verse) by Figure 8 Rock and skin me.
Reel me to the end, rock me naked and I will bend backwards for your
camera eye.
And the camera eyes for all who feast on my need.
The never full dirty need I have down where it really matters.
Inside my soul, outside my body. I work to pulse hard for all who eat my
flesh and I smile as the eyes blink and one little tear is pushed
forward from my heart.
Up the ladder:
Who Are We
Down the ladder:
To a Friend
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Posted: January 21, 2004 6:17 AM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2004 6:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10676 Comments:
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LilMsLadyPoet @ 205.188.116.139
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14-Jun-05/3:18 PM
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This made me feel ill...it was repulsive to me, even though I am not entirely sure of what you are portraying here....and I have a feeling I don't want to know. I suspect "eyes"...in, "the camera eyes" means the camera eye IS, if so, it should be: "the camera eye's for all"....so on.
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