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My Daffodil bulb (Free verse) by YoungLady When I went out
The sun was hot
It shone upon
My flower pot
And then I saw
A spike of green
That no one else
Had ever seen
On other days
The things I see
Are mostly old
Except for me
But this green
So new and small
Had never yet
Been seen at all.
Up the ladder:
rather not high jump every 20 minutes, well maybe o.k.
Down the ladder:
6. Retina
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Posted: January 21, 2004 12:59 AM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2004 12:59 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7103 Comments:
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When I woke up
The sun was hot
It shone upon
My chamber pot
And then I saw
A coil of brown
And felt I'd best
Inform the towne
On other days
The things I dump
Are mostly grey
And not so plump
But this young brown
So sleek and proud
Is sure to draw
A mighty crowd!