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Listen (Lyric) by candaliesa Come closer to me, can you hear it?
Shh... quiet, just listen to it!
Listen closely to the melody.
The love, the pain, the agony.
Open you heart to the sound.
Let your thoughts leave you now.
Listen to what it says to you.
Can you hear it saying "I love you"?
It's the beating of my heart you see,
It's beating now because it's free.
Thanks to you it beats again.
Soft and gentle like the wind.
--cmr--
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Posted: January 6, 2004 1:47 AM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 1:47 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7178 Comments:
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A lot of cliches though such as my heart is free (has it been let out of your rib cage?)
Also hearts do not have melodies they have beats.