poemranker ::sex in the city/sex in the country by tralala42001

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Free verse № 79670

sex in the city/sex in the country

Member since 2004 · Posted 17 Jan 2004 · 10 comments

by now i have developed pictures of women torn in between by blanket hands singing the nightly death of lost sons and graveyard husbands who cheat on their own corpse with handfuls of loose dirt tombstone etchings like the faded green numbers on the loose flesh of your forearm social security wrapping each digit like the worms of inheritance asking for whore money out of your poor sickly pants, cum stained and faded like a sidewalk cracked like teeth, smiling like a building -son of dad

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[7] titan69 18-Jan-04/1:06 AM Reply
what a strange world you live in???
[8] richa 18-Jan-04/5:22 AM Reply
The first 3/4 verses are good, the end just degenerates.
[4] zodiac 18-Jan-04/8:46 PM Reply
Son of dad is the only good part. Do you mind if I steal it for a garage-band name?
[n/a] tralala42001 24-Jan-04/11:24 AM Reply
this is for zosiac: the name for that band already exist
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › tralala42001 24-Jan-04/11:27 AM Reply
Which band took it?
[n/a] tralala42001 24-Jan-04/11:25 AM Reply
sorry i meant zodiac (sorry for the mispelling)
[n/a] tralala42001 24-Jan-04/12:25 PM Reply
that name (son of dad) is already taken by the craziest awesomest most turbolest batmanest kickassest super turbo posted upness band around!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › tralala42001 24-Jan-04/12:27 PM Reply
Yeah, but what band is it?
[n/a] tralala42001 24-Jan-04/12:52 PM Reply
the band IS "Son Of Dad" (from Los Angeles)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › tralala42001 24-Jan-04/1:00 PM Reply
Then why did they take it, if they were already called that?

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