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Sweet Anguish (Free verse) by sonawrote
We laughed out loud even when there was a crowd
we walked naked on the beach in July sun
we shared a silence that was loud
but turned a blind eye to what had just begun...
I turned you out, you dragged me in
who knew degrees could go so low in sin
young sexy bodies... hotel rooms, in the yard
somehow you knew you held my wild card
What's become of you? What's become of me?
I think this was the first time I was free
romantic memoir's of our mutual lustful needs
some persuasion, no regret,
amazing times, I won't forget
especially how I cried myself to sleep ...
and... trust me dear there weren't any sheep
just the scar from when I walked away for good
cause it tore me up inside
and part of my heart died
when I tried to do
what I thought was best for you
and walked out while I thought that I still could
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Posted: January 17, 2004 1:35 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2004 1:35 PM PST
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