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across the lake (Free verse) by baden
Across the Lake
This cold mountain vista reflected so clear,
So far across the lake, but seems so near.
Snow like icing , dusted on peaks,
Shadowey ravines and fast rocky creeks.
There by a bluff a hawk soaring on high,
For a moment I wished and dreamed I could fly.
Below me the lake in shimmering blue,
Then into a valley and upward I flew.
Loose shingle rock grey in the morn,
Steep black cliffs from where it was born
Rainbows danced where a waterfall fell,
Soft in a mist like a magical spell.
Past great rocks perched on high,
Like mountain gods , they laughed at the sky.
Great rivers of snow caught and held fast,
Many things of wonder I saw as I passed.
Then down to the lake far below I flew,
Past a dark valley where bright flowers grew.
Then over that lake, my wings did soar,
Past washed and black rocks to a familiar shore.
There in a house perched high on its street,
Sat a man with a rug covering his feet.
By a chipped wooden window in silence he sat,
His white face warmed with an old woolen hat.
He watched as I passed, his eyes stared into mine,
Sleek wings caught the sunlight and made them shine.
Then gone from the sky, back alone I sat,
By a chipped wooden window , in an old woolen hat.
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Posted: January 16, 2004 6:58 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2004 6:58 PM PST
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