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Flown (Free verse) by MacFrantic
I freed a bird I
Named him Phil
He was a fool he
Was a pill
That lazy stare that
Awful grin
An evil eye an
Honest sin
For Phil I gave for
Phil I waited
By and by
I grew more sated
Until the day until
My time
This fiend this
Bird of wicked rhyme
He perched so sly he
Screeched his rule
So loud he pierced so
Sharp and cruel
At last I broke at
Last I cowed
Who rescued who
From certain shrouds
This is my crib this
Is my crypt
For Phil no more for
This my kip
I stand and wait I
Watch him go
Now burden gone now
Burden flown
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Posted: January 15, 2004 11:26 AM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2004 11:26 AM PST
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