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a new notch

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Oct 2005 · 1 comment

The light filters through the window Casting shadows on the hardwood floor Meandering through the kitchen Climbing up the hallway door A steady trip along the frame Reveals etches in its bark And after months of similarity It now bears a new mark Numbers scribbled right beside Reveal a peculiar tale Of wet times marked by famine While dead seasons prevail

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[7] cabot 13-Oct-05/10:55 PM Reply
great poem, check mine out