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a new notch (Free verse) by oneglove
The light filters through the window Casting shadows on the hardwood floor Meandering through the kitchen Climbing up the hallway door A steady trip along the frame Reveals etches in its bark And after months of similarity It now bears a new mark Numbers scribbled right beside Reveal a peculiar tale Of wet times marked by famine While dead seasons prevail

Up the ladder: Pre Dance Jitters
Down the ladder: My Lie

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8964
Posted: October 6, 2005 9:45 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2005 9:45 PM PDT
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[7] cabot @ 68.8.167.40 | 13-Oct-05/10:55 PM | Reply
great poem, check mine out
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