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a new notch (Free verse) by oneglove

The light filters through the window Casting shadows on the hardwood floor Meandering through the kitchen Climbing up the hallway door A steady trip along the frame Reveals etches in its bark And after months of similarity It now bears a new mark Numbers scribbled right beside Reveal a peculiar tale Of wet times marked by famine While dead seasons prevail

cabot 13-Oct-05/10:55 PM
great poem, check mine out




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