Ode № 7888

My Sun

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

I am a sun. I am the son of my sun. My sun shines through me. My sun is a son, to his sun. I will be a sun to my son. I shall luminate my ultra-voilet ways unto him... My "Sunways", my nutrients, As well as my unbearable heat. I am the source of life on Mother Earth. Without my sun's shine, there is no sunshine. Without my sunshine my son cant shine. A son rises everyday... Shine bright suns, for bright sonlight! Da1 Osborne

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[7] horus8 7-Aug-02/2:56 PM Reply

Ra is good/Ra is great/helmet on and procreate. I pumped the pimp for pounds! I pumped the pimp for gimp. I have no clue as to what i'm talking about. well lit poem. Almost too lit. I'm lit! I'm lit! whohoooo! Ouch burn..ed.my. HAIR ON FIRE! MAN DOWN! MAN DOWN! AHHHHH. SHIT..SHIT 911. <this message has been cut short due to a lack of present brain activity, <feed my dog oliander> o