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Last flight of a goose (Free verse) by Bobjim
See it fly, Straight into a noose. Hear it cry, "Last flight of a goose."

Up the ladder: A flightless deer
Down the ladder: thematic

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7631
Posted: January 6, 2004 5:02 AM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 5:02 AM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.241.31 | 6-Jan-04/5:51 AM | Reply
In reverse this poem is ace!!!!
[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 7-Jan-04/8:04 AM | Reply
more.
[6] Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.37 | 10-Mar-06/5:03 AM | Reply
I would have said 'the goose' as this is more emphatic
[9] Ranger @ 86.131.44.143 | 19-Sep-06/12:49 PM | Reply
Agreed with richa, order it 3,4,1,2. This is legendary :-)
[2] colbaby @ 220.233.180.7 | 20-Sep-06/5:47 AM | Reply
I'm a freak too! Here's cheers!
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