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Give me something (Free verse) by candaliesa
Give me hope, give me love, Give me something I can't shove. Give me happiness, give me joy, Give me something that is not a toy. Give me anger, give me tears, Give me something to remember these years. Give me forever, give me true, Give me all this, and I'll have you 5/13/99
Up the ladder: ~Frosty~
Down the ladder: Untitled 26
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11171
Posted: January 6, 2004 2:00 AM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 2:00 AM PST
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[6] JoyLuck @ 65.173.32.8 | 6-Jan-04/10:59 PM | Reply
I give you 6*
Too much "give me" repetition






* just so you don't kill urself
[6] JoyLuck @ 65.173.32.8 | 6-Jan-04/11:00 PM | Reply
But I won't

Give you a knife
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