poemranker ::Give me something by candaliesa

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Free verse № 78749

Give me something

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

Give me hope, give me love, Give me something I can't shove. Give me happiness, give me joy, Give me something that is not a toy. Give me anger, give me tears, Give me something to remember these years. Give me forever, give me true, Give me all this, and I'll have you 5/13/99

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[6] JoyLuck 6-Jan-04/10:59 PM Reply
I give you 6*
Too much "give me" repetition






* just so you don't kill urself
[6] JoyLuck 6-Jan-04/11:00 PM Reply
But I won't

Give you a knife