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Wondering on the Streets (Free verse) by woodstock20000
I wonder if the stars are made of tears.
Could it be
that in the earth's constant
turning
yearning
that our tears
fling off
fly off
into the night sky
burning through the billowy fear
turning into
moonstone
or quartz
or some sort of volcanic marvel
and seep
seep
into the cloak of darkness
making love
making sadness
burning bright with all
the emotion that
made them
shamed them
into existence?
For if the stars are made of tears, my friend
I have birthed a galaxy.
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Posted: November 4, 2005 12:43 PM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2005 12:43 PM PST
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