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Formidable Adversary(for ErgoErgun) (Free verse) by wordherd
Take heart Tear it- Rip and rob it, Make rubbish And stuff it Inside you- Fill your being, A speakeasy Whose brilliance Is mute and stinks Of robbery Practice the art of rape And just try to penetrate With your helquin trash A saintly pool of Valorous light that Can't be owned c. wordherd

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11283
Posted: August 7, 2002 11:06 AM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:07 AM PDT
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[6] Bachus @ 24.126.0.40 | 7-Aug-02/12:14 PM | Reply
This is unworthy of the ergot prophet. "Cannon Fodder" is best delivered cold. In a frosted mug with the name Saint Stephen sweating on it's side. You are no Saint, but I prepare the best helquin trash.
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