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To Mourn the Loss of an Old Friend (Free verse) by GregDeEgg I'm sad
and I can't smile
because she's gone
and can't come back.
My skill
is dead
my whim
is spent
my effort
she took with her
to wherever she went.
In weeks
I'll return
and find new joy
but hers is lost--
spilt when the day turned dark
and my head turned away.
Up the ladder:
Waiting In The Shadows
Down the ladder:
HURRICANE!
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Posted: December 21, 2003 6:15 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 6:15 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1986713 Overall Rank: 4613 Comments:
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tadpole @ 24.55.117.36
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21-Dec-03/8:47 PM
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Eternal rest grant unto her. . .
good poetry
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