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Walls so slight (Free verse) by donmiguel1960
Resting on the sand near the edge of the waives,
lies a delicate seashell, as the dark ancient graves
Walls so slight, spiral in design
a shell of a lifeâs treasures, colors so divine.
Gentle pillows of white pearl, line the abode
So smooth and appealing with beauty bestowed .
A glorious dwelling of sculpture and beauty,
vacant coats of armor, with unfulfilled duty.
A protective refuge from lifeâs endless blows,
with the splendor of beauty, of a dark garden rose.
No resident to inherit this home so yearning,
no dreams to fulfill, with an emptiness burning.
Inviting to all that gaze at its love,
but a home just for one, a soft gentle glove.
Waiting for passion to complete from within,
with that one distant hope, then life can begin.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4609
Posted: August 8, 2004 10:33 AM PDT; Last modified: August 8, 2004 10:33 AM PDT
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