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Cry... (Free verse) by Tineke
Your heart is bleeding Tears are burning in your eyes You don't have to tell me I see it boy I know it boy It really hurts Try to accept then try to forget Don't let sadness rule your life But boy, please give it time Now... you still can cry cause tears are still burning in your eyes What... Are you scared? Are you afraid? afraid to cry? afraid to show what you feel? Don't be scared... you're alone with me now. So lay your head on my shoulder and cry...

Up the ladder: Bondage
Down the ladder: Every Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10225
Posted: December 18, 2003 7:40 AM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2003 7:40 AM PST
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