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Crystal Lane Swift? Today is your crucifixion. (Other) by DreamerSupreme
Hey, congratulations on just giving yourself FOUR tens! using your two
nicks: one ten with CLS, one with lydia and twice anonymously.
Your latest poems are high up on the vote scale because of you.. must be
proud of it.
How pathetic can you get? Voting on yourself? You want to know something
else thats REALLY funny?
You voted tons of tens on my other nick Y2kSlamPoet.. and who knows who
else- think I should go check, but I'm not that motivated.
So you hate SupremeDreamer- me? And LOVE Y2kSlamPoet? Me? look, we
should work this out, no really, I want to understand this utter
stupidity.
You know, you make my clown act look like shit- why? because your just
naturally brainless.
Hell, YOU EVEN GAVE A TEN TO MY POEM "Timmy Christ Didn't Like Dr. Seuss"
And your a devout christian? Fucking hogwash lady. You have no dignity
or self respect- and whats worse? You have no fucking clue that your
being an idiot.
Maybe today I'm like "full of teen angst?"
But no. I was doing my "fuck you + jokes" bit, and then I started
looking at voting details.. thats when I fucking lost it. Darkie
couldn't push my buttons as well as you can, hell, I actually enjoy
fighting with him.
But you? I just want to fucking squash you. I'm being completely honest.
I REALLY dislike you. Have a nice day lady. Oh, and heres the evidence:
Our Future (Free verse) by lydia evelyn
We are on the verge
Of something very exciting.
No matter which path we choose
And which God leads us down,
I am certain of one thing.
I know,
Like I have known nothing else
In my life,
As long as we walk together,
We will make beautiful things.
Our lives will be blessed.
There is no doubt
In my mind
That if we surrender
All to He who is Lord,
We will forever remain
Unbroken.
We will do great things.
I know it.
Whether those great things
Which God calls us to do seem small,
To the world around us,
Such as simply those values
We instill in our children,
Or reforming politics and religion
As we humans know them today,
I know we will be blessed
And oh, so happy.
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Shuushin 147.154.235.52 7 December 17, 2003 12:18 PM PST
Shardik 24.126.116.54 7 December 17, 2003 12:00 PM PST
wcrystal lane swiftw 147.226.177.23 10 December 17, 2003 11:03 AM PST
Anonymous 147.226.177.23 10 December 17, 2003 11:02 AM PST
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Our New Dance (Free verse) by wcrystal lane swiftw
I know not why it has taken this long,
For me to grasp that your love is reliable as the dawn.
Always there, without fail, you are,
You care for all of me, whether physically near or far.
Open dreams wrap âround, so full of wistfulness,
They fill my heart with blissfulness.
Shifting vision, betwixt fantasy and reality,
Making my eyelids part, then shut mightily.
Strength of your body, now reflection in mind,
Looking in to you, I cherish what I find.
Confusion spreads at will, an endless spring,
Releasing control, I ponder that which future may bring.
Black and white finally reveal their gray,
Accepting it, I want for that which may.
Loosening grip, I partake of our new dance,
Come with me, we are worth this chance.
Sorry does not describe the depth that I feel,
I only now discovered that this is real.
Join me, on this virtual ballroom floor,
You have open and filled my heartâs wide door.
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Everyone 81.128.206.201 0 December 17, 2003 12:00 PM PST
Shardik 24.126.116.54 8 December 17, 2003 11:53 AM PST
lydia evelyn 147.226.177.23 10 December 17, 2003 11:05 AM PST
Anonymous 147.226.177.23 10 December 17, 2003 11:04 AM PST
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AND HERES YOU GIVING A TEN TO:
Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet
Today was special- Jesus's grandson was hung
from the monkey bars, staples encircling his brow.
The children danced around him.
Janice caught his blood in barbies teacup
and each had a taste of divinity.
Schoolyard singing drifted- a childs ditty:
Timmy Christ swings on a noose
He prayed before eating raisins
Told the teacher he didn't like Dr. Seuss
Said that he could erase our sins
Warned us that satan was loose
We killed the last lamb today
Every child here hated him
Timmy Christ is on display
Blood is sweet from lambs limb
Timmy Christ lived in the old abbey
At lunch he drank holy water
Swore he could walk across the sea
He always slept on the altar
All the kids said he was a looney
We killed Timmy with glee
First we thrashed him in the bathroom
Then the teacher gave us all a smiley
For sending Timmy to his doom
They sung until story time
and left him swinging,
laughing about the schoolyard killing
and the urine dripping from
little Timmy's shorts.
Indeed, it was very special today
the day children killed Jesus's great grandson.
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Shardik 24.126.116.54 10 November 15, 2003 2:12 AM PST
-=Dark_Angel=- 163.1.146.47 0 October 10, 2003 1:41 AM PDT
Bachus 24.126.113.154 9 October 9, 2003 9:30 AM PDT
<~> 167.206.181.179 2 October 9, 2003 7:04 AM PDT
rockmage 68.165.174.187 10 October 8, 2003 7:27 PM PDT
wcrystal lane swiftw 205.188.209.14 10 October 8, 2003 12:25 PM PDT
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2958
Posted: December 17, 2003 2:44 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2003 2:44 PM PST
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