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To W (Free verse) by kingit
Thoughts of you return to me today As I muse on your lost dreams and suffering. But then, again, I cannot think on these Without remembering your love of life. Always in the Fall of the year Your face returns to haunt me My soul reaches out to you, longing- Wondering where you have gone? The purpose of our meeting Does not escape my grasp, For once two souls embrace The world is changed - a different place!

Up the ladder: skittles
Down the ladder: Transparent

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8137
Posted: December 7, 2003 4:56 PM PST; Last modified: October 12, 2009 3:48 AM PDT
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[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.62.220 | 7-Dec-03/6:17 PM | Reply
Thanking you, while I expose my soft, white under-belly.
[9] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 7-Dec-03/6:28 PM | Reply
Here's a nine, mr. pillsbury.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.62.220 | 7-Dec-03/6:34 PM | Reply
I WISH I had some dough!!!
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