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Love, Lust, Lost

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

For every end there’s a start Where everyone tries to be a star While some would make it Others would take a fall Just like the way of romance Our hearts looking for occupants If you think we would fit Then you’re in for one big tale (Chorus) A trilogy of love, lust, lost Hearts was a burning now in winter frost And when we see the credits The show is over, and you don’t have to pretend The story starts with a boy and a girl Plain and simple these characters were And at first glance they couldn’t resist Feelings took them like little pawns What went on in this relationship Many kisses and what others with Their expressions went very intimate But what goes up must come down (Chorus) Now it is time for our finale Where it doesn’t go like movies would We finished in a bitter ending For there’s reality in our Hollywood (Chorus/End)

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[8] deleted user 21-Nov-03/1:43 PM Reply
the following don't rhyme: start/star; romance/occupants; would; hollywood

another revision may be in order.
[n/a] horus8 › deleted user 21-Nov-03/3:58 PM Reply
John? I agree completely. Did the piece make you say Hollywould?