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knowing and KNOWING (Free verse) by Joe-joe She lay face down
Encased in grains of sand
That made way without resistance
Laying claim to that darkened vault
Where knowing was not
And seeing was a senseless chore
But where wisdom flourished
And guided her to the oceans shore.
Up the ladder:
Granting Asylum
Down the ladder:
ROAD BLOB!!!
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Posted: November 19, 2003 8:20 AM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 8:20 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.717177 Overall Rank: 1905 Comments:
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The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54
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19-Nov-03/10:17 PM
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AHHH>>yes memories of face down in mazatlan after too many 'ritas, seeing can be a bit crossed. wisdom gained? writting down the number of the vault with passport and money is always a plus...thanks for the memories of oceans shore for ever more.
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