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knowing and KNOWING (Free verse) by Joe-joe

She lay face down Encased in grains of sand That made way without resistance Laying claim to that darkened vault Where knowing was not And seeing was a senseless chore But where wisdom flourished And guided her to the oceans shore.

The_Third_Isis 19-Nov-03/10:17 PM
AHHH>>yes memories of face down in mazatlan after too many 'ritas, seeing can be a bit crossed. wisdom gained? writting down the number of the vault with passport and money is always a plus...thanks for the memories of oceans shore for ever more.




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