poemranker ::Renewal by hummers86

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Renewal

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Nov 2003 · Edited 19 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

Decisions unsure The plank coming short, This life is in hand From this lifeless discord While black tainted fires Swiftly burn silhouettes, Discourse echo inert minds Causing epidemic effects The clans of hallowed ties And redundant sins, Clash with rebuttal attraction Bringing unadulterated kin Though tried over again Renewal is the incessant episode, For the one who brings liberation Undeniably will renew the old Crashing through life’s windows At times a hopeless chore When a window is shut Then lye’s open a door Conform my crimson heart To the shape of your desire So one may embellish And spread constant fire

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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 19-Nov-03/10:11 PM Reply
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