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Renewal (Free verse) by hummers86
Decisions unsure The plank coming short, This life is in hand From this lifeless discord While black tainted fires Swiftly burn silhouettes, Discourse echo inert minds Causing epidemic effects The clans of hallowed ties And redundant sins, Clash with rebuttal attraction Bringing unadulterated kin Though tried over again Renewal is the incessant episode, For the one who brings liberation Undeniably will renew the old Crashing through life’s windows At times a hopeless chore When a window is shut Then lye’s open a door Conform my crimson heart To the shape of your desire So one may embellish And spread constant fire

Down the ladder: The 8th Day

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9468
Posted: November 18, 2003 6:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 8:41 PM PST
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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 19-Nov-03/10:11 PM | Reply
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