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Renewal (Free verse) by hummers86
Decisions unsure
The plank coming short,
This life is in hand
From this lifeless discord
While black tainted fires
Swiftly burn silhouettes,
Discourse echo inert minds
Causing epidemic effects
The clans of hallowed ties
And redundant sins,
Clash with rebuttal attraction
Bringing unadulterated kin
Though tried over again
Renewal is the incessant episode,
For the one who brings liberation
Undeniably will renew the old
Crashing through lifeâs windows
At times a hopeless chore
When a window is shut
Then lyeâs open a door
Conform my crimson heart
To the shape of your desire
So one may embellish
And spread constant fire
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9500
Posted: November 18, 2003 6:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 8:41 PM PST
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