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January (Free verse) by gregg333
Our bodies on a January morning
Put together like dinosaur bones
Everything frozen
Like the moment
Words soft in the air
Feeling like nuclear submarines
Hung in an ocean
Feeling the fiery moments
Of a hundred lifetimes
As we chase each other
Through the tall grass of time
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9514
Posted: August 27, 2004 11:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2004 11:42 PM PDT
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