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January (Free verse) by gregg333
Our bodies on a January morning Put together like dinosaur bones Everything frozen Like the moment Words soft in the air Feeling like nuclear submarines Hung in an ocean Feeling the fiery moments Of a hundred lifetimes As we chase each other Through the tall grass of time

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9487
Posted: August 27, 2004 11:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2004 11:42 PM PDT
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