poemranker ::January by gregg333

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January

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Aug 2004 · 0 comments

Our bodies on a January morning Put together like dinosaur bones Everything frozen Like the moment Words soft in the air Feeling like nuclear submarines Hung in an ocean Feeling the fiery moments Of a hundred lifetimes As we chase each other Through the tall grass of time

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