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You love it. (Free verse) by skaskowski
part one:
handy handled tennis racquet
bread dangles from strings
an air mattress swings
part two:
connection of all nouns
with verbs and prepositions
under the bread jumps over the racquet etc.
part three:
odd plot twist, paradoxical
climax. fiber defeats fighter.
collapse on the bed and relax.
part four:
smooth ending. recede into dreaming.
falling asleep at the wheel
leads to literary mass-appeal.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 7009
Posted: November 14, 2003 10:11 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2003 10:12 AM PST
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I almost hate the last part, but the others are so good I'm willing to live with it.
and if the "love" in the title has anything to do with tennis scorings, I will re-visit this with a ONE.
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