poemranker ::You love it. by skaskowski

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Free verse № 75165

You love it.

Member since 2001 · Posted 14 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

part one: handy handled tennis racquet bread dangles from strings an air mattress swings part two: connection of all nouns with verbs and prepositions under the bread jumps over the racquet etc. part three: odd plot twist, paradoxical climax. fiber defeats fighter. collapse on the bed and relax. part four: smooth ending. recede into dreaming. falling asleep at the wheel leads to literary mass-appeal.

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[8] Shuushin 15-Nov-03/12:20 AM Reply
I don't hate it. It's got a fresh format too.

I almost hate the last part, but the others are so good I'm willing to live with it.

and if the "love" in the title has anything to do with tennis scorings, I will re-visit this with a ONE.


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[n/a] skaskowski › Shuushin 17-Nov-03/2:32 PM Reply
hahaha i didnt even think about that! i mean, i'm clever.