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You love it. (Free verse) by skaskowski

part one: handy handled tennis racquet bread dangles from strings an air mattress swings part two: connection of all nouns with verbs and prepositions under the bread jumps over the racquet etc. part three: odd plot twist, paradoxical climax. fiber defeats fighter. collapse on the bed and relax. part four: smooth ending. recede into dreaming. falling asleep at the wheel leads to literary mass-appeal.

skaskowski 17-Nov-03/2:32 PM
hahaha i didnt even think about that! i mean, i'm clever.




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