every moment will soon be memory

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

somehow stretching two more seconds of ecstasy from one disappearing kiss seems so silly...

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[7] Bill Z Bub 23-Oct-03/9:46 PM Reply

I like the title very much. But the ellipses must go, imho.

[6] Shardik 24-Oct-03/1:49 AM Reply

I was hoping for slippery tan hips and less pip.

[7] EAger to Offend 24-Oct-03/6:35 AM Reply

I can appreciate a sober thought expressed clearly and simply. Agree with Bill though, the elipse is pointless.

[8] richa 24-Oct-03/11:41 AM Reply

Nice idea, you can hear the pensive voice in the last three words