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every moment will soon be memory (Free verse) by calliope

somehow stretching two more seconds of ecstasy from one disappearing kiss seems so silly...

Bill Z Bub 23-Oct-03/9:46 PM
I like the title very much. But the ellipses must go, imho.




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