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The Pedagogue and his son (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
I've never considered the possibilities of life- its a bitch my father said he also was found of saying: "c'est la vie" He never did convice me to stop trying to change life into something better. He knew, that in time I'd understand change occurs only within oneself. Took a long time old man, but I understand now- hopefully. You'll whisper your answer in my dreams won't you? Hopefully. "c'est la vie"

Up the ladder: "oh"
Down the ladder: Silence

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4532
Posted: October 13, 2003 8:16 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2003 8:16 PM PDT
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[n/a] Geschäftsreise @ 4.40.32.229 | 13-Oct-03/9:03 PM | Reply
Hopefully your dad will correct your spelling. In your dreams that is. ;) - it's "c'est la vie" (to be pedagogical)
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.160.202 > Geschäftsreise | 13-Oct-03/11:48 PM | Reply
corrected
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.47 > SupremeDreamer | 14-Oct-03/4:08 AM | Reply
A further 3 clerical errors remain.
[n/a] Wobble McFly @ 195.157.153.253 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 14-Oct-03/4:12 AM | Reply
I can see 8 in total.




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