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line, hooked a stinker (Free verse) by kingit
reality sets in realize i want your skin to always be around me regardless where it's been... i'll risk a possible burn for a definite singe crawl out of the frying pan start upon a binge... booze will prob'ly drown me 'fore i rid my thoughts of you- anyway what really matters is the pain was rare & true so if you drag your carcass back within my reach i'll stab you for my supper & stick to you like a leech.

Up the ladder: Addiction
Down the ladder: Somber Like My Pain

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8346
Posted: October 10, 2003 2:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 2:19 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Oct-03/3:03 PM | Reply
Appetizing, very.
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