poemranker ::line, hooked a stinker by kingit

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line, hooked a stinker

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

reality sets in realize i want your skin to always be around me regardless where it's been... i'll risk a possible burn for a definite singe crawl out of the frying pan start upon a binge... booze will prob'ly drown me 'fore i rid my thoughts of you- anyway what really matters is the pain was rare & true so if you drag your carcass back within my reach i'll stab you for my supper & stick to you like a leech.

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[8] horus8 10-Oct-03/3:03 PM Reply
Appetizing, very.