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castle of pandas (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
you're not a bear! you're more like a cat! a giant cat! panda bear the cat! What you think about that! Oh, you wear a hat? Well, you're still a cat! Bears don't wear hats! What was the point of that?! (all the pandas dance around and try to recreate Animal Farm (plaigarism?) but to no avail: everybody knows that bears are democrats, not communists.) You are a stupid panda! Stupid panda! Go back to the mountains! This castle is for dinosaurs!

Up the ladder: not titled
Down the ladder: Impeccable mess

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.5965877
Overall Rank: 12549
Posted: October 6, 2003 1:35 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2003 1:35 AM PDT
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[5] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 6-Oct-03/7:58 AM | Reply
Maybe the republican guard should shoot them all in their black-encircled eyes?

Is crazy. This is crazy freeform flow/klang association. Well, at least it rhymes part way; all good poems rhyme, right?
[7] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.21 | 6-Oct-03/5:56 PM | Reply
the middle isn't so hot, but the rest is wonderful.
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