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castle of pandas (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

you're not a bear! you're more like a cat! a giant cat! panda bear the cat! What you think about that! Oh, you wear a hat? Well, you're still a cat! Bears don't wear hats! What was the point of that?! (all the pandas dance around and try to recreate Animal Farm (plaigarism?) but to no avail: everybody knows that bears are democrats, not communists.) You are a stupid panda! Stupid panda! Go back to the mountains! This castle is for dinosaurs!

Shuushin 6-Oct-03/7:58 AM
Maybe the republican guard should shoot them all in their black-encircled eyes?

Is crazy. This is crazy freeform flow/klang association. Well, at least it rhymes part way; all good poems rhyme, right?




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