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Neophyte Bourgeoisie (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
We own this view
Now, after such a wait.
It is well earned
And someday we will afford
The time to enjoy it,
â¦And the sauna, and the pool,
And the workout roomâ¦.
In summer, this view adorned
Our late afternoon brunches.
We would return the calls
Weâd slept through and offer
The traffic report, live from the 8th floor
Just for fun
Because we own the view.
How is it that this stone-brained
High school dropout
Can keep up with the Joneses?
He couldnât be plotting a cottage
Right now if it wasnât for his
Sweet Lady Macbeth.
So even though she is back
On the school schedule,
And I work graveyard shift
On the weekends,
When I get home and shower off the smoke,
I drip dry on our deck,
Cool Autumn breezes spiking my skin
Before dawn and sleep.
I watch the 401âs river of lights
And modestly think,
âI can make do with two kids
â¦I donât really need the extra point five.â
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Weighted score: 5.2384057
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Posted: September 24, 2003 11:15 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2003 11:15 PM PDT
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Sometimes it's time alone.