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Lacking (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
A gifted light shines on him
Let the sun burn the world
Who cannot see his changes?
The blood drips down my palms
Can you see a change in me?
Can you repeat the anger of defeat?
Leave me
I feel the blood consuming me
Translations distorted
Enraged by rage to the point of red
Feeble beings are not my equal
And no one is wiser than he
The changes are reoccurring
Pointless changes that drive me mad
I am losing what I thought was uncontrolled
Bleed before me
Lay in the midst of sin
And die trying to live.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7750
Posted: September 22, 2003 1:35 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2003 1:35 PM PDT
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