poemranker ::tragedy by ThePariahDog

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Free verse № 66336

tragedy

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Sep 2003 · 0 comments

dimly lit caverns winding down to the end of life we go now through these corridors past the pain drying from tears falling like rain why did you leave me? why did you die? i'm still here! i'm still alive! the frustration builds time stands still you're alone and only you can atone for what you've done and said but until that moment comes when you're dead please take note you're not alone

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