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tragedy (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
dimly lit caverns
winding down
to the end of life
we go now
through these corridors
past the pain
drying from tears
falling like rain
why did you leave me?
why did you die?
i'm still here!
i'm still alive!
the frustration builds
time stands still
you're alone
and only you can atone
for what you've done and said
but until that moment comes
when you're dead
please take note
you're not alone
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8421
Posted: September 20, 2003 10:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2003 10:05 PM PDT
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