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tragedy (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
dimly lit caverns winding down to the end of life we go now through these corridors past the pain drying from tears falling like rain why did you leave me? why did you die? i'm still here! i'm still alive! the frustration builds time stands still you're alone and only you can atone for what you've done and said but until that moment comes when you're dead please take note you're not alone

Up the ladder: Thunderbird and Maledict
Down the ladder: Boy

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8415
Posted: September 20, 2003 10:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2003 10:05 PM PDT
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