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Boy (Free verse) by clark187
When you think
you have exausted your tank
of hope
Your gone.....
its over
its not,
new hopes
and dreams
are on the
way boy
don't fret
of cry
of weep
boy
Never complain boy....
You've got more going for you
than you know boy
somebody
is going to help you....
boy
somebody will have you boy
Somebody will paint you in pastels on the
carefully stretched canvas
of their life
and look at every
time they awake
in their lucid morning
admiring your glory boy
how it overshadows the dark oils
of the background
the background of their life
boy
You are the sun, and the harvest
moon boy
gased at in wonder boy
You
will be loved boy
and
nothing
can take that away, for it only
takes time
boy
for
the
blind world
to
see
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8422
Posted: September 22, 2003 7:42 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2003 7:42 PM PDT
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