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Free verse № 6495

minute

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

who cares? do you? ain't nothing but a minute singing, writing and talking but not saying anything. traveling in time from one hot minute to the next preparing for lifes' soft and dark underside. so if i write it down and swear to share it will it make you or me feel better?

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3 comments

[5] pete 29-Jul-02/12:11 PM Reply
. yes , .... thank you
[7] emilyowey 21-Aug-02/10:58 AM Reply
I like it, it's chunky and real.
[9] dancin_n_da_moonlite 9-Jan-05/12:39 PM Reply
i like this ....
-mega