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minute (Free verse) by flatliner
who cares? do you? ain't nothing but a minute singing, writing and talking but not saying anything. traveling in time from one hot minute to the next preparing for lifes' soft and dark underside. so if i write it down and swear to share it will it make you or me feel better?

Up the ladder: As I sit
Down the ladder: Half Empty, Half Whole

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8690
Posted: July 29, 2002 7:10 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 7:10 AM PDT
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[5] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 29-Jul-02/12:11 PM | Reply
. yes , .... thank you
[7] emilyowey @ 205.188.200.164 | 21-Aug-02/10:58 AM | Reply
I like it, it's chunky and real.
[9] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135 | 9-Jan-05/12:39 PM | Reply
i like this ....
-mega
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