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maternal-infant bonding (rejection) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer -
midgets
that is what i have given birth to
little brutes
with leaky diapers
and deformed heads
their mewlings pester me
constantly
they are now left to drown
in mummies milk
the drink of love.
Up the ladder:
Halves
Down the ladder:
Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired)
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Posted: September 11, 2003 12:03 AM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2003 12:03 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.2777777 Overall Rank: 901 Comments:
Awww how cute your diaper is leaking. Interesting poem man... here's an 8
Nice. I loved "their mewlings". Interesting coming from you- did some research, did you?
actually, no, i was just thinking about the subject and my imagination spilled this onto paper.
I thought you'd birthed some infants from your (pleasingly) tight ("straight") anus, hence the deformed heads.
LMAO. you are indeed imaginative.
10
mummie's milk...
found the poem funny, enjoyed it. 355 view(s)
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kind of rough, remorseless talking to the reader.
like punk/ like beat.