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maternal-infant bonding (rejection) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
- midgets that is what i have given birth to little brutes with leaky diapers and deformed heads their mewlings pester me constantly they are now left to drown in mummies milk the drink of love.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 1993
Posted: September 11, 2003 12:03 AM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2003 12:03 AM PDT
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[8] richa @ 81.86.88.72 | 11-Sep-03/12:34 PM | Reply
like this,
kind of rough, remorseless talking to the reader.
like punk/ like beat.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 69.19.177.188 > richa | 12-Sep-03/4:33 PM | Reply
yeah, it still gives me the chills everytime i look at it... then i remember i wrote it, and i grin like the cold hearted bastard i am.
[8] LuckyJoe @ 216.248.118.254 | 11-Sep-03/5:38 PM | Reply
Awww how cute your diaper is leaking. Interesting poem man... here's an 8
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.126 | 12-Sep-03/10:59 AM | Reply
Nice. I loved "their mewlings". Interesting coming from you- did some research, did you?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 69.19.177.188 > http://mulberryfairy | 12-Sep-03/4:35 PM | Reply
actually, no, i was just thinking about the subject and my imagination spilled this onto paper.
I thought you'd birthed some infants from your (pleasingly) tight ("straight") anus, hence the deformed heads.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.180.168 > http://mulberryfairy | 12-Sep-03/7:48 PM | Reply
LMAO. you are indeed imaginative.
[10] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.57 | 14-Sep-03/9:25 PM | Reply
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