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What's World Peace?

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

There is a system in this world today They think their better than every one But hey, they try to cover it up with shorter names F.B.I, C.I.A., the government it’s all the same They’ll put you down when you’re picked to lose They set you up as they choose Covering up anything with no doubt So that this economy will remain the same Intact with pride and no shame U.S.A is what their all about So why don’t we just shout “Fuck you bush, clean my Tush.” But then again we’re all a little sacred Of living in this country that just don’t care Even though they say we have freedom of speak When someone rises up and tries to teach, us something new The government always their to stop them with their crew Secret service is what their called, but it’s not so secret As you see, they think they have something on everybody But that’s where there wrong cuss you have to believe They never really wanted peace in the Middle East So they say this is for are own good What about the twin tower attacks Did the government really understood What those were really about? In my mind it was just a wake up call So why did everyone attack appalled?

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[1] Joe-joe 6-Sep-03/5:02 AM Reply
You suffer from severe paranoia my friend! If the CIA, FBI. SS....was as you describe your ass would be in shackles and you'd be boyfiend (i'll refrain from graphic depictions)to some hard core lifer at a federal prison. Please don't be offended but you write in broken english. Are you a recent immigrant, an 11 year old, or just a fucking illiterate?
[n/a] http://mulberryfairy › Joe-joe 6-Sep-03/10:03 AM Reply
It is not paranoia, it is called the US Patriot Act II.
[6] richa 6-Sep-03/12:37 PM Reply
I am sure much of this is true, but it needs framing better. A different perspective, something to interest the cynic