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go away (Free verse) by casey
Call me when they're single wanting to hang out treat me like a princess Call me when they're sad but dont stick around even in through my tears they say i gotta go Some of my girls they dont stick around when they're out having fun im inside crying i cant be wiht them and they dont stay with me In my hour of need who do i have not a dad, not a brother no friends or another guys say fuck me i say fuck u, if u wanna be with me friend or more u gotta prove to me that ur here for me when ur sad and when IM sad its a two way street get wiht it. or go away

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9440
Posted: September 5, 2003 2:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2003 2:00 PM PDT
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[8] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.109 | 5-Sep-03/3:25 PM | Reply
liked it, what else do you got?
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