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Test (Free verse) by justjay
I can't breath.
My chest pounds-
Mind racing-
All blank.
Everything I went towards
gone in one single
click of the clock.
What am i suppose to do?
I try and remember-
think-
think-
think-
This only worries me more.
I rush-
scared to think what others will think.
societies' murderous eyes-
eyes that piece my soul
This heart rendering pain covers me.
I stare blankly
as i slowly die-
Dieing from the inside out.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9444
Posted: August 17, 2003 7:09 PM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2003 7:09 PM PDT
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