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tai chi (Free verse) by tiamat
balance is a thing like a knife,
you have to hold it just right.
running quickly, you are falling between each step.
each foot reasserting control in a
split
moment
skimming over the ground
in a way that birds cannot master
you must let your breath go
there's no use keeping it
if there's no more to be had
you are
already dead.
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Posted: July 27, 2002 10:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2002 10:52 PM PDT
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