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A Choice Offense

by Retaliate

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

It is certainly a crime, this thing I have done, and a crime in itself to enjoy its villainy - on two counts am I remorseless guilty But it is not the once or the twice of it that is the real conceit, not this exception, or the conception of this deceit, but the condemnable reality that my world is a prison I could escape but choose not to.

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[n/a] deleted user 2-Sep-03/12:32 AM Reply
What if you were in a prison and there was a horse that would come and visit you? Would you really wait with tickly expectation for that Sunday's visit?
[n/a] Retaliate › deleted user 2-Sep-03/12:36 AM Reply
That's not funny, I was the prison bitch of a guy named Horse. And nothing about Horse 'tickled'.