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A Choice Offense (Free verse) by Retaliate It is certainly a crime, this thing I have done,
and a crime in itself to enjoy its villainy -
on two counts am I remorseless guilty
But it is not the once or the twice of it
that is the real conceit,
not this exception,
or the conception of this deceit,
but the condemnable reality
that my world is a prison
I could escape but choose not to.
Up the ladder:
Restraint
Down the ladder:
Alien Abduction
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Posted: September 2, 2003 12:25 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2003 12:25 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7677 Comments:
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2-Sep-03/12:32 AM
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What if you were in a prison and there was a horse that would come and visit you? Would you really wait with tickly expectation for that Sunday's visit?
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Retaliate @ 4.40.32.229
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2-Sep-03/12:36 AM
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That's not funny, I was the prison bitch of a guy named Horse. And nothing about Horse 'tickled'.
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