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Coloquy (Free verse) by emilyowey
There is less than understanding
Inside what we can say.
Rising high inside my eyelids
Making rivers dance and fall.
Words like chewed tobacco
Layers of shortened filth.
Wisps of crescent moon rays,
Light through every side.
The vague cries of pain and love,
Wanting more than freedom gives.
Colors for the feel of stains.
Rain is what we need.
To clean with grit.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8314
Posted: July 27, 2002 7:25 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2002 7:25 PM PDT
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