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Coloquy (Free verse) by emilyowey
There is less than understanding Inside what we can say. Rising high inside my eyelids Making rivers dance and fall. Words like chewed tobacco Layers of shortened filth. Wisps of crescent moon rays, Light through every side. The vague cries of pain and love, Wanting more than freedom gives. Colors for the feel of stains. Rain is what we need. To clean with grit.

Up the ladder: The Difficulty of Life
Down the ladder: Drowning

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8308
Posted: July 27, 2002 7:25 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2002 7:25 PM PDT
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[8] robustyoungsoul @ 65.187.46.130 | 27-Jul-02/9:32 PM | Reply
Layers of shortened filth... quality.
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