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Bad-Ass Motherfucker (Pimple) by William Delacroix Pleased to meet you, my name is Mr. Nobody.
I come from a place where I do not belong.
The path becomes clear through my tainted eyes:
I'm the one with the gun; every last motherfucker dies.
Up the ladder:
Cat
Down the ladder:
tridaze
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Posted: August 31, 2003 6:39 AM PDT; Last modified: August 31, 2003 6:39 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7222223 Overall Rank: 11860 Comments:
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EAger to Offend @ 65.95.240.61
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8-Sep-03/7:16 AM
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I think only the last line is legitimate "pimple". "...through tainted eyes" is too aware to be pimple but, that line makes for a better poem overall.
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