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Bad-Ass Motherfucker (Pimple) by William Delacroix

Pleased to meet you, my name is Mr. Nobody. I come from a place where I do not belong. The path becomes clear through my tainted eyes: I'm the one with the gun; every last motherfucker dies.

EAger to Offend 8-Sep-03/7:16 AM
I think only the last line is legitimate "pimple". "...through tainted eyes" is too aware to be pimple but, that line makes for a better poem overall.




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