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tridaze (Free verse) by xanthippe
thirty-foot pillars of concrete I, loitering at their feet grass scratches at my knees begging to grow roots into me. chewing on a helpless pencap a bird flies by, staring and I have to wonder why occasionally two things meet and you know something is then complete, purpose and opportunity greet. a sharp curb waterfalls above the gutter I watch the oilwater rain take it's course into the vast ocean of Earth's beauty reminded to follow my own only I want to make it to the finish unpolluted.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11861
Posted: October 29, 2002 12:14 AM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2002 12:14 AM PST
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