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Free verse № 6102

A strange Wonder

Member since 2001 · Posted 26 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

A strange wonder of timeless eternity an innocent smile as a flickering flame as a roaring ocean like an enchanting rhythm My heart Where does one vanish from the night sky from dancing moonlights How do i become a single feather flowing with the wind Ascending, descending, afloat in undrawn lines

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[7] x311 26-Jul-02/9:12 AM Reply
Kind of light and easy-flowing. I could see someone out in the middle of an open field saying this all philisophically
[9] deleted user 29-Jan-04/9:57 AM Reply
i can imagine everything as i read it...