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A strange Wonder (Free verse) by mozac A strange wonder
of timeless eternity
an innocent smile
as a flickering flame
as a roaring ocean
like an enchanting rhythm
My heart
Where does one vanish
from the night sky
from dancing moonlights
How do i become
a single feather
flowing with the wind
Ascending, descending, afloat
in undrawn lines
Up the ladder:
Shamefaced
Down the ladder:
A black sanded tropical vision
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Posted: July 26, 2002 7:57 AM PDT; Last modified: July 26, 2002 7:57 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.345782 Overall Rank: 3398 Comments:
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x311 @ 63.227.192.5
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26-Jul-02/9:12 AM
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Kind of light and easy-flowing. I could see someone out in the middle of an open field saying this all philisophically
i can imagine everything as i read it...
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