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Back to Sorrow (Free verse) by justjay Linked into logic-
controlled by all that is around me.
Trying to break the stronghold-
but the clamps hold tight.
To struggle is to tangle-
to tangle is to tumble-
to tumble is to fall.
Worried about falling.
Will the links always be there?
If I fall what will happen?
Who will be there with me?
Rolling in pain I reach out-
Reach out to comfort-
Reach out to a friendly hand.
All I grab is the links again-
Back to sorrow. . .
Up the ladder:
Muddy Streams
Down the ladder:
Piano Guitar Passion
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Posted: August 17, 2003 7:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2003 7:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10531 Comments:
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Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13
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17-Aug-03/7:57 PM
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It is sometimes wrong to climb and then fall.. but it is always a mistake not to attemp one... sometime you fall sometimes not... but there is a third alternative.. 4 for candor
i'd say all i grab ARE the links again...
sorry.... 175 view(s)
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