Replying to a comment on:

Back to Sorrow (Free verse) by justjay

Linked into logic- controlled by all that is around me. Trying to break the stronghold- but the clamps hold tight. To struggle is to tangle- to tangle is to tumble- to tumble is to fall. Worried about falling. Will the links always be there? If I fall what will happen? Who will be there with me? Rolling in pain I reach out- Reach out to comfort- Reach out to a friendly hand. All I grab is the links again- Back to sorrow. . .

Lifeboatman 17-Aug-03/7:57 PM
It is sometimes wrong to climb and then fall.. but it is always a mistake not to attemp one... sometime you fall sometimes not... but there is a third alternative.. 4 for candor




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001